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Post by Addisonsgirl on Mar 29, 2014 10:43:30 GMT -5
New chapter soon. Anyone have any ideas for new chapters?
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Post by Deleted on Apr 7, 2014 4:21:50 GMT -5
New chapter soon. Anyone have any ideas for new chapters? not that we're running out of ideas, partner o'mine...
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Post by gracie on Apr 24, 2014 19:30:33 GMT -5
Nothing changes... Both your efforts and hard work pays off each chapter I read. So .Well Maddie is being unreasonable; though she may want to wait 2 years it could take just as long at her age to conceive a child. Not saying she is old, but even as young as your 30’s it can be more of a challenge to get pregnant. Maddie is working woman and loves that control, she is never was going to be a stay at home mother which David understood. Hmm ideas for chapters, I need to read the next chapter, but on the subject for the future I would like to see perhaps more children, maybe the return of Sam lol and a case? I love their disagreements and banter! Maybe something as big as separation? Or one of them suffers a near death experience to make the other one realises they can’t live without each other LOL. I also think when Maddie was 16 remember you telling us her situation with that creep and why she is the way she is etc.. Maybe you should bring him into the scene, and we can find out more information that we might not be aware of… As you said, you don’t really need ideas your work is fantastic. Brilliant chapter I’ve missed reviewing. Still a huge fan always will be xxx
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Post by gracie on Apr 24, 2014 20:05:37 GMT -5
Ok... Just realised I reviewed the wrong page LOL!! Wicked Chapter, I do feel sorry for Maddie in this chapter, because she is not a young mum and there is the pressure of doing everything quickly because she is not getting any younger. You’ve brought real problems in the latest chapters which happen in many marriages certainly when children are involved. At the end of the day It will always be will they or won’t they with Maddie and David, it goes the same with their marriage, will or won’t it be forever? Hmm… the chapter was really intense, and the fights seem to keep getting bigger and bigger. You are keeping me on my toes whether or not this will work for them in the long run.. Hope you consider some of my ideas it’s nice to ask the readers opinions cool stuff xx
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Post by Addisonsgirl on Apr 25, 2014 5:17:47 GMT -5
Your ideas are very interesting. won't give anything a way but some of your ideas are already nitpicking at the back of my mind! Please feel free to review and keep giving us ideas!
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Post by Deleted on Apr 27, 2014 23:38:52 GMT -5
Hey gracie, missed your reviews!! Yes, we felt sorry for Maddie too - she wasn't really selfish, was she? She just still needs to talk earlier about her worries. Yes, their fights are not just light banters, they do get to the substance sometimes, and like any other couple their relationship ciuld suffer from that... but also, so far they always have resolved it in the end, that's one of their strengths. Stay tuned and keep reviewing!
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