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Post by Deleted on Jan 10, 2014 8:08:50 GMT -5
Here's a little preview for our nect chapter which will be uploaded tomorrow, Baby Boom:
She stormed into Blue Moon and slammed into her office, leaving Agnes and the wobblies wondering what was wrong now. Since their bosses had been together, Miss Hayes' temperamental fits and ugly mood swings had been remarkably reduced, and when she was in a bad mood, it had usually to do with Mr. Addison – some things never changed. But as far as they knew, David had been out all morning on a case with Bert Viola, so he couldn’t be the cause of her bad mood. Although... with her, you never knew.
Agnes was determined to find out more. She slowly approached Maddie’s office and tentatively knocked on the door. “Miss Hayes? Are you okay?”
Maddie didn’t feel like talking to anyone but she couldn’t snub Agnes, not like she had used to sometimes in the past. “Come on in, Agnes,” she called reluctantly.
Agnes scrutinized her closely and could see that she had been crying. Suddenly, she was nervous. “Is everything okay with you and the baby?” she asked.
“Oh, Agnes! Yes, everything is great. Why would you ask such a thing?” Maddie’s voice was a bit peevish.
Agnes sat in the chair in front of Maddie’s desk. “Well, you don't look too great,” she told her bluntly. “In fact, you look like you’ve been crying.” A worried frown flew over Agnes' face, and Maddie felt a little guilty when she saw her concern.
“It’s nothing, Agnes.” Maddie waved her hand in the air dismissively.
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Post by Deleted on Jan 14, 2014 3:41:31 GMT -5
The next chapter is already under construction please review this one!
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Post by gracie on Jan 19, 2014 14:54:54 GMT -5
What a moving chapter, poor David he had a rough childhood, brilliant gonna read the next one now XXXX
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Post by Deleted on Jan 19, 2014 17:28:31 GMT -5
thanks gracie, and don't you love the backstories about the Addison boys??
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Post by Addisonsgirl on Jan 19, 2014 17:31:10 GMT -5
Thanks for the review.We think delving into their pasts make them more real to us.
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Post by Nalowenn on Jan 21, 2014 20:29:18 GMT -5
That was a really interesting chapter, very moving.. I really enjoyed your portrayal about their childhood, poor david, poor Richie, lifes a bitch x
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Post by Addisonsgirl on Jan 22, 2014 13:10:22 GMT -5
Thanks for your feedback. Hopefully the ladies in their lives will make up for their unhappy childhood!
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Post by Deleted on Jan 22, 2014 15:37:05 GMT -5
Thanks Nalowenn, we missed you around! Yes our hearts broke for those boys too. Now go and read chapter 17!
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