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Post by Deleted on Sept 25, 2013 23:36:59 GMT -5
Thanks everybody for their great feedback!! An alpha male, I like that LOL yes, we think he was certainly the domineering part in the bedroom. Great to see you are as obsessed with them as we are! And yes, continuity is very important to us.
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Post by moony58 on Sept 26, 2013 14:08:12 GMT -5
A sweet and heartfelt chapter, characters are wonderfully drawn, how beautifully you convey the intensity of both their emotions. Thank you. I hope their is much more installed for readers. Thank you writers.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2013 15:24:46 GMT -5
Thank you, moony. There is so much more in store for you all!!
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Post by gracie on Sept 26, 2013 16:23:06 GMT -5
Ah no I don't have Facebook.. but I'm sure it must be a great page book. I enjoy posting feedback and thoughts here though, even though I ramble LOL Oh yes he certainly has the Alpha thing going on, LOVE IT. The aura of power, of control that just draws women in, that are programmed to react to him in that way as a female of the species. Its no wonder Maddie suffered through the early stages of the relationship, not having the control. With all her past experiences, makes even more sense why she tried to fight off someone like David, because the fact is its impossible
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Post by Addisonsgirl on Sept 26, 2013 18:07:52 GMT -5
Yes he really is a strong man and someone who needs to be in control like Maddie was so scared of him. She knew she couldn't control him or herself when she was around him.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 26, 2013 23:33:37 GMT -5
Agree gracie, the control freak thing is one of her msin issues and reasons for fighting him off st first. Although I don't think he wants to be in control of everything, of their relationship etc. - it's just the bedroom LOL and that loss of control especially over herself frightened her to the max!!!
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Post by zigg on Sept 27, 2013 11:56:52 GMT -5
Great story. Get used to hearing this; I plan on reviewing every chapter. I'm glad someone is actually writing about Moonlighting. Keep up great work.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 27, 2013 13:51:05 GMT -5
We can't get enough of your feedback!! Yes please, review every chapter, review also It Happened That Month (the prequel of Other Side) and Plea Bargain (our first story written together)! And thanks for taking the time to read AND review, everybody!!! You are a great audience!!
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Post by Addisonsgirl on Sept 27, 2013 14:48:45 GMT -5
Review away!!! Glad people are reading what we love to write!!!
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Post by Avory72 on Sept 28, 2013 18:02:01 GMT -5
Just been reading chapter 6 and 7 and it was perfect. You developed the relationship so well from that point of the show in this story AND in it happened that month. Your fanfics always put a smile on my face and I'm sorry I don't review it more often. I should, there just isn't enough time, unfortunately. But please, oh please, do continue!
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Post by Addisonsgirl on Sept 28, 2013 18:42:48 GMT -5
Thanks for reading our stories and taking time to leave feedback!!! We are continuing with this epic saga but we have just written a short piece which we will be psoting tomorrow. It is a twist on the pact in To Heiress Human.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 29, 2013 4:23:26 GMT -5
Thanks Avory. Don't worry, we take what we can get yes we think it's important to develop the characters but stay in character at the same time. We don't see an ending yet to this story... I think I can speak for us both when I say it's not our call to end it anyway... they kinda write themselves!
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Post by Addisonsgirl on Sept 30, 2013 15:15:56 GMT -5
Yes especially the sex scenes LOL
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Post by grace on Oct 1, 2013 14:00:52 GMT -5
Hey! it's me again! Where is the next Chapter! Please post a new chapter soon
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Post by Addisonsgirl on Oct 1, 2013 15:16:06 GMT -5
Working on it! remember we took a short detour to write the twist on the pact. Soon!!
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