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Post by Deleted on Sept 24, 2013 3:31:57 GMT -5
Feedback for the soon-to-be-posted chapter 7 please here
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Post by gracie on Sept 24, 2013 10:37:36 GMT -5
WILLLLLLLLLL DO
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Post by Nalowenn on Sept 24, 2013 15:20:20 GMT -5
I'm very excited, who's the boss? You leave me with nothing to go on here LOL I love how I can't even predict the next part, because I'm kept surprised every chapter. Not a clue what will happen next... cant wait.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 24, 2013 15:30:09 GMT -5
I'm very excited, who's the boss? You leave me with nothing to go on here LOL I love how I can't even predict the next part, because I'm kept surprised every chapter. Not a clue what will happen next... cant wait. You don't have to wait any longer... just go and read and find out!!
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Post by gracie on Sept 25, 2013 9:11:55 GMT -5
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Post by Deleted on Sept 25, 2013 9:25:55 GMT -5
Thank you gracie!!! The quality of smut, I like that!!!!!! LOL yes I think they have a lot of catching up to do to talk about their feelings, this is as important as the smut!
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Post by Addisonsgirl on Sept 25, 2013 10:11:39 GMT -5
Smut? lol We like to think of it as imaginative lovemaking loll. Thanks for the feedback! And yes David and Maddie are finally baring their souls to each other as well as their bodies and hearts!
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Post by guest on Sept 25, 2013 11:49:16 GMT -5
David and Maddie are fantastically drawn and so consistent in your story, I look forward to every chapter.
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Post by Eryne on Sept 25, 2013 11:57:52 GMT -5
Love this chapter, love this story, love their love, love the way they love each other, love their worries and God do i love their love making! Love, Love, Love, DAVID XXXXXXXXXXX
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Post by Addisonsgirl on Sept 25, 2013 12:26:26 GMT -5
Thanks guys!!! We love them too!!!! So happy that you are enjoying our stories!!!
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Post by ML fan on Sept 25, 2013 12:44:14 GMT -5
Aw my gosh. . . . such a great chapter! love your story! You are an amazing writer! I'm addicted to moonlighting, I can't stop reading it! I love how you portray Maddie and David relationship, YEOW David is the boss in the bedroom. David turned the tables around GOOD> You are amazing! Keep going! Thank you!
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Post by Addisonsgirl on Sept 25, 2013 15:32:03 GMT -5
We thank all of you for your enthusiastic reviews. We love making them 'come' alive! And he is the boss...THUD!!
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Post by Nalowenn on Sept 25, 2013 17:49:16 GMT -5
A perfect chapter. I loved the part where Maddie confided in David. The scene was amazing, that jack ass bastard who treated her badly when she was young. This is definitely my favorite chapter for so many reasons. David is definitely BOSS LOL
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Post by gracie on Sept 25, 2013 18:03:38 GMT -5
David is a true alpha male, positively dominating in the Boss Scene, Such a turn on!! I can't wait for the next part Also The new story idea you'll be working on, so exciting, there is so much to look forward too
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Post by Addisonsgirl on Sept 25, 2013 18:14:15 GMT -5
Working on a twist on the 'pact' crap lol. And Chapter 8 is in our heads soon to be written!! Many exciting things are in store for our beloved couple! Stay tuned. and if you want to talk ML join our facebook board!! It is busy 24/7 and we are always looking for new member to share their ideas and love of the show with us!
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