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Post by Deleted on Oct 18, 2013 4:24:19 GMT -5
Here's a little preview for the soon upcoming new chapter 9 "Meet The Parents": the whole thing will presumably be posted tomorrow! Suddenly, out of nowhere David's words from a long time ago rang in her ears when during one of their heated discussions he had called her Miss I-made-a-million-bucks-off-my-physical-beauty-but-not-a-dime-off-my-emotional-substance Hayes... Not being able yet to free her mind completely from the superficial values she had learned to be important in her modeling days, now she only saw a middle aged fat woman and that made her cringe as she turned away from the mirror with tears in her eyes. Maddie felt a little better as she parked the car and strolled towards the restaurant where she was meeting David. It was a bright sunny day and the sky was clear and blue with no smog in sight. She noticed David walking towards the restaurant from the other direction and felt her heart beat fast and a smile spread on her face as she looked at him strutting across the street. He was wearing his light grey suit which was one of her favorites and he looked hot and sexy and so – young. Other women were also eyeing him hungrily she noticed, but what stopped her in her tracks was the sight of David smiling back! How could he flirt with those women?
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Post by gracie on Oct 18, 2013 17:50:48 GMT -5
OOOOOOO I sense jealousy and hormones in the mix, SO EXCITED and I just can't hide it!!!!!!
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Post by Deleted on Oct 21, 2013 15:05:55 GMT -5
Come on, folks - feedback, please!!
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Post by guest on Oct 22, 2013 6:09:32 GMT -5
This story is legendary! it's romantic, with just the pefect dash of comedy. Write more soon.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 22, 2013 10:34:15 GMT -5
Thanks! Chapter 10 is already under construction. I'm not promising anything, but it might be ready by next weekend (before I take a week off )
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Post by gracie on Oct 22, 2013 11:57:31 GMT -5
Ah thank God the Bambina OK!!! PHEWWWY I loved how David confessed about Stephanie. ABOUT TIME! Loved the smut! Do understand why Maddie doesn't want to stay at home fulltime, this aint the 50's typical blokes, but great how their is always a good argument in each chapter, because this is them! LOL UPload Soon Want to see them make up in David and Maddie fashion
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Post by Nalowenn on Oct 22, 2013 12:09:58 GMT -5
Oh wow felt bad for Maddie, as a woman I can understand her feelings completely! but I can't understand why dave is pissed. Maybe were seeing this from the 21st century point of view, and this is the 80's.. I don't understand why dave thinks she don't trust him in the office, I think he missing the point, great chapter looking forward to the next one, with some hot loving and great make up sex and an agreement of some sort and baby names.
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Post by Deleted on Oct 22, 2013 17:57:04 GMT -5
Thanks guys... you know us so well, making up stuff is coming right up LOL yes David is a little old fashioned, but his main problem was that Maddie went behind his back and started to contact daycare centers without even talking to him first. Hadn't she done that, maybe he woukd have listened to her...
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Post by Addisonsgirl on Oct 23, 2013 5:02:17 GMT -5
Soon ladies. The new chapter should be up by Saturday!!!
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Post by zigg on Oct 23, 2013 16:24:04 GMT -5
Fantastic chapter, I like how Maddie is insecure about getting old, forever young we wish... Never knew David was 5 years younger? I assumed they were the same age, Wow Cybill Shepherd you go girl. My only constructive criticism is I thought Maddie was 36/37 in what would be season 3/4? I'm sure you mentioned her age in a few chapters ago and now she's turning 40? Back to the positives I completely love this alternate universe. I could stay lost in this moonlighting world forever. Great work team moonlighting, proud fan and appreciate your work so much, more soon please thankyou
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Post by Addisonsgirl on Oct 23, 2013 17:45:11 GMT -5
Thanks for your review! And you are welcome. We are also lost in our Moonlighting universe - the way it should be for always.
Since we began this story after To Heiress Human in season 3 we are saying Maddie is 36 going on 37 at this point in our story. She meant when she turned 40 he would still be only 35 - she isn't near 40 yet.
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Post by Avory72 on Oct 23, 2013 18:04:08 GMT -5
I've been catching up with chapter 8 and 9 and I still love this story so much, I was scared she would lose the baby like she did in the show but its nice to see your not as mean, and a happy ending is in order for the best tv couple ever! Thank you Devils Advocate and Addison girl fab job as always, anticipating chapter 10
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Post by Addisonsgirl on Oct 24, 2013 4:58:49 GMT -5
You are welcome! We wouldn't hurt the Bean! Already we've made this baby real. Soon we are thinking of starting a thread of name suggestions for the Bean.
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Post by Eryne on Oct 24, 2013 11:58:50 GMT -5
Oh my what's with Maddie keeping David in the dark all the time? Love David! oo baby names, lets have a think!! XXXXXXX
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Post by Guest on Oct 24, 2013 14:07:42 GMT -5
How about Sarah? Brook? Phoebe? Ella? Kelly? Heidi? Abigail? Kasey? Katelynne? Hallie? xxx
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