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Post by Addisonsgirl on Sept 29, 2013 13:12:44 GMT -5
Feedback welcome!!
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Post by gracie on Sept 29, 2013 14:07:09 GMT -5
OMG That was ridiculously brilliant, I admire your work so much, to all the writers. Such a great idea! I love the different take on this episode, so good!! I loved how well the story fitted with their situation and so many similarities. I was scared their weren't going to be a happy ending LOL
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Post by Addisonsgirl on Sept 29, 2013 15:36:10 GMT -5
Thanks for your feedback. We always want a happy ending. Oh there are only 2 of us. We write together.
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Post by fan xx on Sept 29, 2013 17:51:55 GMT -5
Awe that was amazing can't wait to read more from a true fan x
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Post by Fran86 on Sept 29, 2013 17:57:46 GMT -5
WOW this fic is amazing - Can't wait to read more
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Post by Fran86 on Sept 29, 2013 18:03:49 GMT -5
This fic is so great, will you be doing more? It's so WOW this show is too good, I think you have the characterisations very well between Mad and Dave, especially her confusion over her feelings for him. Will you be doing a next chapter? I be lookin forward to readin more, this is really good fanfiction xx
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Post by Fran86 on Sept 29, 2013 18:05:27 GMT -5
Please do a sequel ((
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Post by fan xx on Sept 29, 2013 18:09:03 GMT -5
be cool to see a sequel I loved that last bit xx
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Post by Fran86 on Sept 29, 2013 18:19:25 GMT -5
So emotional towards the end; with a great happy ending, love moonlighting
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Post by Guest on Sept 29, 2013 18:27:33 GMT -5
Good story but it is finished. Read, It happened that month and the other side of the moon, continuous to Heiress Human
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Post by Deleted on Sept 29, 2013 23:33:05 GMT -5
Thanks for your reviews, guys! We enjoyed this shot very much, but it was only a one-shot... now we're continuing with the bigger goal... chapter 8 of the neverending story Other Side Of The Moon!
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Post by Deleted on Sept 30, 2013 2:40:28 GMT -5
OMG That was ridiculously brilliant, I admire your work so much, to all the writers. Such a great idea! I love the different take on this episode, so good!! I loved how well the story fitted with their situation and so many similarities. I was scared their weren't going to be a happy ending LOL Awww thanks gracie, but you should know us by now you can always expect a happy ending from us, even if there may be some angsty twists every now and then. And Addisonsgirl and I write every chapter or piece together, it's really a joint work (sometimes you find even phrases that are co-written might sound weird, but for us it works). Now on to chapter 8.
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Post by Nalowenn on Sept 30, 2013 18:30:59 GMT -5
Awe I'm loving this story, a nice touch with creating an image and a mood of what both were feeling, liked the idea of each of them seeing whatever was holding them back. Clearly for Maddie... always wondered how this episode could have turned out, this is so good I really loved your ideas. Anticipating a terrific chapter soon in the other side, thank you author's xx
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Post by zigg on Sept 30, 2013 18:54:22 GMT -5
Wonderful to read. I've always enjoyed how you've written all the fanfics you've done including early work in pacts and pals? maybe I'm mistaken. Either way, I'm truly stunned. It's fascinating how it's so well-written, with voices matching them so naturally. I can see it happening in my head as if it were an actual episode. You've conveyed the turbulent and conflicting emotions being experienced by both characters, David and Maddie's reactions and emotions are written and illustrated perfectly, your characterizations are spot-on. Thanks for writing and sharing, more updates soon.
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Post by Deleted on Sept 30, 2013 23:25:33 GMT -5
Thank you so much!! Yes, the next chapter is under construction! Zigg, our earier works are pactsandpals, bluemoonstranger and sandra70. Thanks for acknowledging!
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